Well...
I did like the hand-drawn look, and the overall presentation wasn't bad...
I think, however, the story lacked depth and sound. If you're going to make this an animated series, I suggest you give more details and backgrounds to your characters. I barely understood why they ran around doing errands in the first place!
Furthermore, the wind effect in the beginning was a good way to kill the awkward silence that some flash users seem to forget, but after that scene, the rest of the flash had only sound effects and character dialogue. Even if it's some really stupid song, it would be better than absolute silence!
Again, it's pretty good (compared to the instant-blam crap that spams Newgrounds). Keep up the good work!
may the Crosswinds guide you...